Uriah Hamilton


A Dreamscape Of Love - Poem by Uriah Hamilton

I still find comfort
In the soft caress
Of the moonlight’s
Tender glow
And hear your voice
Crystal clear
Drifting gently
Through a seductive breeze.

And I still feel
Your lips upon my neck,
How you would even kiss
The beads of my rosary
In a resplendent prayer
For our eternity
In a dreamscape of love.

Some days and events
Never end
But carry us through
This life
That often feels
Like a city besieged
By dog armies
Of the insensitive and cruel.

And I’ll never forget
When your body was a part of mine.


Comments about A Dreamscape Of Love by Uriah Hamilton

  • Rookie Bell Song (6/24/2007 6:07:00 AM)

    Your poetry is unforgettable. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Michael Gale (10/14/2006 5:49:00 PM)

    It's always the poems of undying love for another love of thy life that makes it to the greatest rated poems of all time. Everyone loves a poem of love.
    This poem is filled with such inTENse emotion. Great poem Uriah.
    God bless all poets-MJG. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Pia Andersson (9/2/2006 4:08:00 AM)

    Pure beauty and how do you comment on that? ...I love every line-Pia (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Will Barber (5/18/2006 2:18:00 PM)

    This is entirely beautiful. I admire it very much. In painting there is a techniqe called chiaroscuro - you use it very well. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 39 Points Patricia Gale (3/2/2006 7:38:00 PM)

    Heartfelt and written. Lovely

    Patricia (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Shannon Chapel (12/29/2005 8:52:00 PM)

    Uriah,
    This is absolutely beautiful. One of the more heartbreakingly sensual poems I've read in a while.

    I started reading your poems beginning with number 1 and will now take great pleasure in reading the rest - only 152 to go! ; -)

    Shannon (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Cj Heck (12/14/2005 5:52:00 AM)

    Uriah, this is absolutely beautiful. I'd always thought all the love poems had been written, but I was wrong. Your poem is tender, loving, and the way it's written makes it look effortless, as though it's the easiest thing in the world. I don't know what else a poet could strive for.
    My warmest regards and respect,
    CJ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Joy Vanderhelm (12/4/2005 6:56:00 PM)

    Very romantic and a truly sensual poem. I loved the final line. You write with such tenderness and such power. Well done. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Kimberly Strothman Anderson (11/26/2005 12:34:00 PM)

    This poem is very touching. Keep up the good work. Kimberly (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Bobbie Ann Pimm (11/20/2005 9:18:00 PM)

    Your bio says your a writer in search of the right word combination - well this combination works for me. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Victoria Hughes (9/28/2005 1:18:00 PM)

    very sweet poem. speaks of a deeply missed lost love. V x (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kathy Anderson (8/25/2005 8:28:00 PM)

    Not bad, very sweet and endearing words which I'm sure your Love appreciates. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie David Gerardino (8/23/2005 9:25:00 AM)

    very good................................the last line i did not like, kinda thru off the poem, but still very good........................... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari (8/16/2005 11:47:00 AM)

    Very romantic and sensual! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Gainor Ventresco (8/6/2005 7:11:00 AM)

    Uriah, this poem is so lovely..thank you (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mary Nagy (8/3/2005 11:42:00 AM)

    This was so beautiful and romantic Uriah! ! I truly loved it. Sincerely, Mary (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, August 3, 2005



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