'Poem? What Poem? ' Poem by Brian Mayo

'Poem? What Poem? '

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I scratched a poem in golden sand-
Some simple words of praise
I thanked the Lord for sunsets and
The skies they set ablaze.

I thanked Him for the ocean's roar
And blessed Him for the beach
I stood on His majestic shore
And praised Him good for each.

So I was pretty damned surprised
To look down at the foam
And see His hand, before my eyes,
Erase my simple poem.

I cursed Him for His wretched prank
And that's the moment when
I swore to God I'd never thank
His sorry butt again.

Monday, November 2, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: beach,god,ocean,poem,religion
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Simone Inez Harriman 13 November 2015

Delightful write Brian. I love the image of your reclaimed poem being swept away.

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David Magill 02 November 2015

Interesting to put this content in 8-6 ballad form, but it works. Last two lines inadvertently create an enjambment that trips up the rhyme. But you nailed the whole thing, really. Nice poem.

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Chuy Amante 02 November 2015

funny how that works... nice write

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Brian Mayo

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