i have labored for a thousand years
to build the ark that rides out
the storm...
to bring peace to a war torn earth,
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Wow, an amazing poem. Like james said, hope your not going just yet. A fantastic write.
I was slightly disturbed by the title which seemed to be a permanent finale. But Its a really great write, that feels like a Romantic era style dirge, flourishing with confident radiance. Just dont go gently into the light.
you touched my soul once more, as you will again. I love this...and as I read it I saw incarnations of holy spirits throughout the ages...blessings.
Eric, This better had not be your last poem, I know you haven't written yourself out yet. Who shall I read if you go? Besides I have to go first, it's only fair Good Write
A fantastic ode to the poetic spirit and efforts throughout the ages. A candle held to the human mirror by an arm that grows but older and hopefully ever wiser. Much appreciated.
OMG no no no you cant be gone...ever since I got back I have been searching for you and I have not seen anything new and I just happen to see a friends list of comments and saw the title of this poem....sigh....your not gone are you....you have inspired me more than anyone that I have known on this site your writings are a true poets dream... to be able to write like you do...so effortlessly sigh....you are my knight in shinning amour when it comes to poetry sir....I will miss you.....your devoted and dedicated fan. Kaila George