Abha Sharma

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Poet’s Poetry - Poem by Abha Sharma

A budding poet learning to express
Pouring the images of the conceived world;
The sensibility maturing with years
The abstract becoming concrete and the concrete abstract;
Shares with the world the inner core of mind
Few dropp deep with him the rest read and don’t mind.

What is it?
Is it Wordsworth’s overflow of Powerful Feelings
Or Eliot’s Escapism from a Personality
Or just a passing thought eager to take birth
Groomed and nurtured with words
Rescued by Coleridge’s Secondary Imagination
Constructing Deconstructing comprehended
By modest and learned souls,
Thus matter converted to flux
Imparting admission to the creator and the created.


Comments about Poet’s Poetry by Abha Sharma

  • Rookie Chitra - (11/30/2008 12:26:00 AM)

    a wonderful insoghtful write on the poets and their evolution (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 3 Points Brett Ackerman (5/26/2008 3:07:00 AM)

    One thing you can come away with here is that - there is almost an endless mixture of contemplative intentions and lingering anxieties that feed the celebration of poetry and all the poets that pleasure in it's limitless possibility. You alight and account for the profound moments quite well, that have been obtained through enigmatic probes and epiphanies within poetic literature. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 80 Points Kesav Easwaran (5/26/2008 12:49:00 AM)

    Poetry any type, should communicate effectively…beautifully emotionally and pleasantly. Both the poet and the reader alike have a mind and option to accept creations at their best or worst (Report) Reply

  • Rookie David Desantis (5/21/2008 1:40:00 PM)

    I love how you always throw in literary references. As with all your work, this is very deep and well written. A poet love's deeply introspective poetry as well as poetry that analyzes the world philosophically (atleast in my opinion) you convey much of this. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Greenwolfe 1962 (5/10/2008 11:44:00 PM)

    Its none of those things. Its communication. That's all it is.
    A communication that either succeeds or fails. Which depends
    on a thousand readers to determine. The poet can create whatever
    fantasy he wishes on paper but it will never equal that created in his
    own mind that tells him he is a success; when, in fact, he is a failure.


    GW62 (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 643 Points Ramesh T A (5/6/2008 2:22:00 PM)

    It seems influences of poets like Wordsworth, Coleridge and T.S. Eliot have urged this piece of poetry to be written by you. Before the influence disappears hold on them tightly to produce a few more poems like this one to make yourself a poet of great repute and a style of your own in a natural way to be appreciated by all soon! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,137 Points James B. Earley (4/27/2008 6:50:00 AM)

    Excellent thought process.......brilliantly executed! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mamta Agarwal (4/25/2008 3:02:00 AM)

    your poem has really captured the process of writing and a poet's evolution. i feel the refinement in expression comes with heightened awareness., which your poems reflect. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Raj Nandy (4/24/2008 11:47:00 PM)

    Abha, Someone tried to write about Keats in Boloji poetry section! How I wish that you had written instead! You would have done a wonderful job!
    -Raj (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 24 Points Andrew Blakemore (4/24/2008 7:50:00 AM)

    Great piece demonstrating wonderful insight. Andrew (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Leonard Daranjo (4/22/2008 3:44:00 AM)

    You have captured images in flight
    By this great erudite write

    Apart from being a natural born poet, you display great knowledge about the subject.

    Take care... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 18 Points Patricia Gale (4/19/2008 5:06:00 PM)

    Splenid insight Abha. From an escape to a delight... or just good therapy. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Brett Ackerman (4/12/2008 12:10:00 AM)

    Poetry is a very tricky touch to demonstrate the nature of life-affirming words that when spoken or read, establish enigmatic tribulation and the modifier of impenetrable incomprehensibility. I think you've managed to write a well-meaninged account that at any particular moment, the human mind seems to find away of trying to get around the nebulous grasp on reality crowned the words. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 39 Points Malini Kadir (3/30/2008 1:24:00 AM)

    Title really creative! poem did not disappoint! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 210 Points Prasanna Kumari (3/29/2008 6:47:00 AM)

    very interesting and thoughtfull.....nice poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie K. V. Venkataramana (3/25/2008 7:57:00 AM)

    Thank you, Abha. Your creativity is conspicuous in your poem. This is a good poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 391 Points Subbaraman N V (3/25/2008 1:02:00 AM)

    No. It is Abha Sharma's great creations on the themes of Love. Truth and God! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Roger Bowman (3/24/2008 8:24:00 AM)

    Wow cool poemo Abha

    Roger (Report) Reply

  • Rookie rohit sapra (3/23/2008 10:10:00 AM)

    This poem is really unique and truly worth reading as it’s a great description of words put together by a poet.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 196 Points Dr.subhendu Kar (3/20/2008 1:39:00 PM)

    interesting when wrougt by ingenuity,
    as when curved by the paints of art...............well penned yet with scholastic vision,10/10, thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, March 16, 2008

Poem Edited: Sunday, March 16, 2008


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