Poetic Eye. Poem by Sandra Feldman

Poetic Eye.

Rating: 5.0


I want to escape!
And touch
The Sky,
But I
Can't seem
To do It
No matter
How hard
I try!

Seems,
The Sky
Is also,
Just an illusion
Of our Dreamer's
Poetical eye...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nosheen Irfan 12 November 2022

So true that there's no escape actually. The perfect place itself is an illusion. A very profound write! We live with so many illusions sadly.

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Sandra Feldman 12 November 2022

You're fluent words and understanding, are such a beautiful blessing!

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Sandra Feldman 12 November 2022

Many thanks for your lovely comment!

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Anil Kumar Panda 11 November 2022

Nice one and beautifully expressed.

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Richard Wlodarski 11 November 2022

The Third Eye fully understands that illusion, Sandra!

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 13 November 2022

poetic eye is the eye of wisdom

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Anjandev Roy 12 November 2022

Just an illusion.....brilliant.....

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Smoky Hoss 12 November 2022

Again, I find myself, at a very deep level within, relating to your poetry; so good, profound and moving. Superb.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 12 November 2022

Brilliant write Sandra Top 5 bravo!

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Sandra Feldman 12 November 2022

Great Comments! At least they are real Thank you!

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