Tonelius Oliver


Poets Dance - Poem by Tonelius Oliver

Poets Dance in the heart of rhythms
Discussion spoken in the pen
Energy being tampered with in the music
Limitations rarely occur in audio-silence
Artist writes from the heart of rhythms
The Poets are dancing
Flaming hot ink drips from the pen
The paper it's a sacrificial victim
It just seems to lay still
there's no escape when the Poets Dance
Rhythmic heartbeats offset the confrontation
of clumsy feet
To tap dance on paper is a joy one must experience
to fully appreciate
It’s not for the faint-hearted


Comments about Poets Dance by Tonelius Oliver

  • Geetha Jayakumar (10/15/2014 11:39:00 PM)


    Wow..Fantastic poem beating in rhythms. Beautiful lines...very true said poets are dancing..

    Poets Dance in the heart of rhythms
    Discussion spoken in the pen
    Energy being tampered with in the music
    Limitations rarely occur in audio-silence
    Artist writes from the heart of rhythms

    I just loved it. Thanks for sharing with us.
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  • (9/3/2007 10:34:00 PM)


    poem is really nice....you seems to b a felling oriented man..as yr words..tells (Report) Reply

  • (9/3/2007 5:19:00 AM)


    oh, i fell like dancing while reading this..well penned! (Report) Reply

  • (6/16/2006 12:08:00 PM)


    You made me promise I'd comment, And I am doing so right now. It is excellent. Beautiful work. Hope to read more. Just send me another message when you write another. (Report) Reply

  • (6/15/2006 1:06:00 PM)


    MY favorite sort of poetry Tone! Nice write. Tai (Report) Reply

  • Peter Lebuhn (5/29/2006 9:59:00 PM)


    Bon Jour Monsieur Oliver
    Indeed this is a wonderful write
    Written with much thought 10 from me my fellow poet
    You should check out a couple of mine
    along the same genre as yours
    Rhythm of the Night
    and the exprensiolless page
    Keep it up keep writing you will go far
    booksurge.com is a good place to start with publishing
    Peter LeBuhn
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  • Anahita Tahmasbi (5/28/2006 3:34:00 AM)


    It is a lovel and thought provoking poem, you know which words to choose and how to apply meaning, I enjoyed reading it! (Report) Reply

  • (5/28/2006 3:19:00 AM)


    (my apologies for such a late comment)

    Indeed, the art of Poetry is not to be taken lightly at all. A lovely dance of words.
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  • (5/27/2006 4:48:00 PM)


    awsome poem. ive always thought music and poetry were intertwined in one another and id never thought of poetry as tap dancing om paper. i love that imagery. i must add that i heart your name as well. it embodys the whole ' philisophical greek scholar' persona....so cool (Report) Reply

  • (5/25/2006 3:29:00 PM)


    I love it, it expresses the music side of poetry and i like that. (Report) Reply

  • (5/25/2006 12:36:00 PM)


    I like this poem especially the lines
    'To tap dance on paper is a joy one must experience
    to fully appreciate
    It’s not for the faint-hearted'
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  • (5/25/2006 5:51:00 AM)


    Respected Poet,

    Sweet words are so soft to hear, so near and dear to Poet lovers.
    The cool and soul of the Poem makes the readers;
    To move and love it's origin of words...
    The heart beat is again beating for the Poets...
    God Love and bless the readers..
    ur's cordially,
    n.k.osho
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  • (5/25/2006 3:28:00 AM)


    weLL done Tonelius great poem
    no one could have done it better

    **KoNi**
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  • Ernestine Northover (5/24/2006 1:57:00 PM)


    A lovely combination of poet and pen. Very well described and a pleasure to read. Love Ernestine XXX (Report) Reply

  • (5/24/2006 1:08:00 PM)


    my thoughts exactly
    PS. mars is a great place to live
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  • (5/24/2006 12:56:00 PM)


    What beautiful rhythm! I love the way this 'dance' is choreographed... For me it's a perfect 10, Tonelius... (Report) Reply

  • (5/24/2006 4:27:00 AM)


    Now this is a stunning poem. I note your main style to be free verse, which obviously allows for more freedom. This piece grabbed me, tugged at my heart and reminded me why I write. Well done. A truly worthy poem. Rosemary (Report) Reply

  • (5/24/2006 3:28:00 AM)


    woooooooo very good u are exilent no problem on ya book babe (Report) Reply

  • (5/24/2006 3:04:00 AM)


    this sums up all about those who dare to write down things they can imagine n they have experienced.. too good.. (Report) Reply

  • Ravi Sathasivam (5/24/2006 1:10:00 AM)


    This is a great work and wonderful contribution.
    I like this line very much 'To tap dance on paper is a joy one must experience
    to fully appreciate'. Amazing.
    Thanks for sharing with us.
    Ravi Sathasivam
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, May 21, 2006



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