Poets We Love Jawad Akhtar Poem by me poet yeps poet

Poets We Love Jawad Akhtar

Rating: 4.0


We can only follow nature
naturally

if we love to survive
clearly

This is all I can say
about
E N V I R ON MENT

He is my friend also
inspired me to come over to PH
and
glad I did

but

here on PH
I only notice
all say
lovely poetry
10 ++++++++++++++++++++

none advises
so how will one
ever improve
just tell me

When I try to
they say who are you
fu

Poets We Love Jawad Akhtar
Thursday, April 26, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: environment,love and art,nature,poetry
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Me Poet Yeps Poet 30 April 2018

AAAAAP NEY hummey woh rahha dikhlayee...phir se...jisse humm sadiyon sey nibhatey rahe... shukriya janabh- - - you read me is an award more than a NOBEL..MY SALAAAAMMS YOUR A POET OF CLASS I am just trying to pass...I am basically a ROMANTIC POET SINCE AGE 5...

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Akhtar Jawad 26 April 2018

Thanks my dear friend, create an imaginary beloved who is your ideal. Think a love story in a lovely environment, gift it to your heart, the heart will return you sweet dreams to write a beautiful poem. I think you have already done it, as you are writing beautiful poems.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 27 April 2018

AAAAAP NEY hummey woh rahha dikhlayee...phir se...jisse humm sadiyon sey nibhatey rahe... shukriya janabh- - - you read me is an award more than a NOBEL..MY SALAAAAMMS YOUR A POET OF CLASS I am just trying to pass...I am basically a ROMANTIC PET SINCE AGE 5...

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Kelly Kurt 26 April 2018

That is poetry! A feeling expressed. I have been trolled, belittled and otherwise harassed here. Flattery is almost as bad... but not. If English is your first language, there is little excuse for grammatical mistakes. Keep writing no matter what! Who is the authority on expression? It is not I. Peace! !

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 27 April 2018

I JUST replied your message grateful thanks o poet young man

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Domanick Schulte 26 April 2018

no one says what to fix up because every poet is different and writes in their own way there is no right or wrong way to write a poem and nice poem it shows that you care about your friend

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 27 April 2018

I only know one thing..we and I only must appreciate- - - at a slant may guide if the other one is willing TO ACCEPT else silence is best rgds DS

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