Speak up, O mightiest mountain
On the apex extraordinaire
What height you conjure
in your Dreams?
Speak up, O fathomless sea
From your dreaded depth
draped in dead silence
What abyss would
shiver you up
to scream?
Speak up, O scorching sun
born with a burning core
Flamed up in furore
What stream of heat
would suffice
your gleam?
Speak up, O pilotbabu! Were you inspired to write this piece when scaling new heights? I think you just did. Cheers. Subroto
well said and so much like a pilot.the point of saturation of the sea, the mountain and the sun are hard to measure.it is boundless and so has always been intruging to the poets.a thoughtful write.
Point of saturation be the amplitude of wisdom/greatness....nature is symbolic of this statement by her mercurial yet majestical aura...Me thinx i caught a smidgeoned lilt of Willie S., here, yes? A fine write, V.! FjR
Excellent poetic outburst. I would add, Speak up, O Insatiable mind On the wings of imagination, What is your limit? CP
Point of saturation comes to those Who get exhaused with their limited explore Your talk to Mountain, Sea and the might Sun.... They never have any saturation point... Brim to their power and glory.... They forever stand to show and shine. I read your poem as an inspiration To be derived to look at these mighties And learn to hold the exploration level With much varities and unlimited. Love reading it... Great write indeed.
They are the matchless wonders of nature......as u say saturated to the brim! well concieved and scripted! ...10!
Vaibhav my friend, you have the ability to walk the paths beyond the reach of an ordinary soul's ability to tread... you have an extraordinary extended imagination... What a great piece you have shared with us... I am glad I read it... Thank you Regards, Kamran
there is a saturation point for everything, including the human mind.nature too! very well written poem which makes you wonder about the magnitude of natures saturation point.great write. ritty
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Lots to ponder here Vaibhav, some believe life itself is eternal, therefore has no saturation. Reads well thank you. Bob 10+