Pointing The Moon Out Poem by Curtis Goodnight

Pointing The Moon Out

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I was pointing the moon out just the other night
saw my finger instead and  i wondered which was right
cause its looking that way
and not the other looking back
makes it all come together
ashen white to neon black

and Tom Waits on the radio 
hoping not to fall for you
while i sang in pieces
the way all old lovers do
cause its looking that way
and not the other looking back
makes it all come together
ashen white to neon black


I sat around sun clad. drank in the dogged dawn
seven breezes brought me butterflies
couldn't bring your scent along 
cause its looking that way
and not the other looking back
makes it all come together
ashen white to neon black

Pointing The Moon Out
Saturday, April 2, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: zen
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tom Billsborough 24 April 2016

wow! With its rhythm sounds like a French Rondeau in Alexandrine. I'll add this to my favourite poems' list. Bowled over by it and Norah's comments, I second.

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Curtis Goodnight 24 April 2016

thanks Tom. There is a certain creative satisfaction that comes from working in rhyme. Like all my rhymed efforts, this one was put to music.

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Norah Tunney 03 April 2016

Seven breezes brought me butterflies They could not bring your scent along Exquisite! ! ! Curtis Beautiful zen poem

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