Nalini Jyotsana Chaturvedi

Silver Star - 3,948 Points (18/2/71 / Jaipur, india)

Poisoned - Poem by Nalini Jyotsana Chaturvedi

my whole world and life crumbles around
there is no noise, there is no sound
a slow deterioration of all land scape
nothing can now save my place

I too am slowly sinking in quicksand
no one to give me a helping hand
I feel myself shrinking in size and shape
for you poisoned me, and there is no escape


Comments about Poisoned by Nalini Jyotsana Chaturvedi

  • Rookie - 45 Points Colleen Courtney (6/10/2014 2:45:00 PM)

    A nicely written piece filled with that helpless feeling of losing control. Can feel the emotions of hopelessness and frustration. Well done. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, June 10, 2014



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