Poor Little Lost Girl Poem by Elisabeth Wingle

Poor Little Lost Girl

Rating: 3.5


Poor little lost girl
Does she love to much?
When she lives will drug abuse
She becomes so out of touch

Poor little lost girl
Why can't you see?
You need to separate your lives
You need to set him free

Poor little lost girl
What can you do?
You know you can't control him
So why not start with you?


Poor little lost girl
The problem still remains
But, if you get the help you need
You will hold the reins

Poor little lost girl
The answers in your soul
Trust yourself and trust in God
And you will reach your goal

Sunday, October 11, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: addiction
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This is the second poem in a pair of poems that are meant to be together. Th name of the first poem is Poor little lost boy, which is posted
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 05 October 2016

Poor little lost girl Does she love to much? When she lives will drug abuse She becomes so out of touch 2 questions: 1 - did you mean too much OR to munch? ? ? 2 - did you mean with drug abuse OR? ? - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - i 'love'...............remains/reins answers.......answer's there are plenty of people who can NOT be trusted to straighten themselves out. i sometimes imagine (somewhat) how easily it would be for a person to be lost, out of control of their lives, and driven to a life of drugs, crime, and/or cruelty. it could be me! AND, being a nonbeliever, i 'have to say': trusting in God may bring some comfort to some, but look around and tell me if all believers have a wonderful life. : ( and, though they say............Money can't buy happiness, i say: a lack of money may well buy misery. bri :) so, let me take a look at the poor little lost boy. p.s. where is the title of MY nursery rhyme to mess with. you know what i mean, i hope. i DID send you a title, as far as i recall/know. do you recall receiving it? ? p.p.s. i really did not have a lot of fun with this. i wrote that after reading only the first stanza.

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Dr Antony Theodore 20 October 2015

Trust yourself and trust in God And you will reach your goal a great theme at the end. the way you call poor little girl touched me. thank you tony

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