Preceding Dissolution Poem by Quin Faas

Preceding Dissolution

Rating: 4.1


Last spent in bloodied high heels
at that Gallery of wine
on top of his desire.
Speaking in false voice,
while nursing a son
that carried his begged of last name.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Saray Brunette 04 November 2009

wow. Thanks for the comment on my poem. and wow again... you are an amazing poet. so deep...: D

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Spiritwind Wood 14 October 2009

I've only read your writing a thousand times it seems..still I just can't get enough-your writing is deep and emotional..love every bit of it-10++++++++++

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Philip Winchester 12 October 2009

A hundred visions in this story, few words but a hundred visions. You have a depth I need to reach, which I may never attain. Talents have to be spread liberally upon those of us that can nurture them. You can help those that can help themselves your words go deep enough to make the difference. A World of Difference believe Me. Kind Regards Philip

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