Time clicking always
Seems so fast for those who wait
Like everlasting
But too short for those who care
Spending with the one you love
Great work here Marvin you are mastering all styles of poetry...from acrostic, free verse, now tanka...Fine imagery used, a thought provoking piece.10++++
I don't know much about tankas but I liked yours.O am attempting here for you: Time’s eyes blink Love dives deep into the soul Unfathomable depths Mocking at Time’s existence Fill the time with blissfulness. CP
that was so meaningful...u encompass your thought in few words so beautifully... : D
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
The ever ticking clock...thank you this is lovely....Fi