Barely conscious
Or hardly caring which way
I face the World,
I took a border step,
Traveling steadily
Against the furious wind
That was sometimes too strong
And so cold it mumbled my senses
Until I felt myself
Completely turned inside out...
I tried to keep the direction
That I have set for
So that somehow,
I will arrive somewhere
Knowing that this path
I have followed faithfully
Has brought me to a state of mind
Where I have proudly
Become myself...
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That was a good journey, you should be proud, an enjoyable read.
the path is followed faithfully......by you.....become yourself.................marvellous..........never no one should left his own path................
To become yourself is a great achievement, and this is a brilliant piece.
Wonderful! ! ! sometimes in life and when young we lose our selves to fit in and to be unjudged throught society. and when wanting to be our selves again, sometimes its too late to find Us. nicely written Romeo :) ~Bella
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
beautiful n sheer brilliance...