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PRIDE

Many poems that I read, read badly toward pride,
but as for me, I must adimt, I'm on prides side.
I'm proud of all I am, and proud of all I do,
If you wore this uniform, you would be proud too.
I'm proud to be all I can be, every single day,
Proud like you, when home from school, your kid bring you an A.
Don't be convinced by what you read, that pride is always bad,
that pride is even concidered bad, just makes me kind of sad.
If prides a sin, I will not live, I'll gladly go to hell,
cuz in a world where prides a sin, hell I might as well.

Submitted: Wednesday, January 14, 2009
Edited: Wednesday, January 14, 2009


Comments about this poem (PRIDE by rico avila )

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  • XXxxKimberleyxxXX .. (3/14/2009 7:20:00 PM)

    a great piece of work i love it :) u should be proud of ur work

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  • Naidz Ladia (1/16/2009 7:14:00 PM)

    prides are sometimes harmful sometimes harmless...it depends on how u carry urself with the pride inside, , , its not bad to be proud of urself, coz thats a reward of being who u r...
    i like ur wrk rico..
    naizz

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  • Brenda Arroyo (1/14/2009 3:01:00 PM)

    Pride has different extreames I guess...


    [sometimes pride is all we got.]

    -Great writting.

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  • Brenda Arroyo (1/14/2009 3:01:00 PM)

    Pride has different extreames I guess...


    [sometimes pride is all we got.]

    -Great writting.

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