Pride And Ego Poem by Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi

Pride And Ego

Rating: 5.0


I hide this in my heart,
for a long time and,
people noticed it,
friends talked about it,
though they do not know,
what that is hidden anew,
I nurture it day by day,
strengthen it say by say,
people noticed it,
friends talked about it,
When they know about it,
I do not understand what is it,
I boast about me and
let my friends to flatter about me,
For the flattering that I get,
I boast about me and
let myself to flatter about them,
My friends know about it,
I know about them,
To survive in this world,
we have to scratch one another,
but the truth hidden in my safe,
can not be shunned always,
from the watchful eyes of my friends,
a word, an action or a scream,
may bring out all the goods,
and evils that is kept in my heart.
as the old meat decays and
emits the repelling odor or
the sweet fermented smell,
from the dried flowers.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Raj Arumugam 28 March 2012

very meaningful lines and insightful too, VS....and I like the style in which it is written too, for rather than pointing at others, the persona here talks about oneself and lets the reader reflect...the rhythm too is very apt...

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Wabi Sabi 27 March 2012

You have a good theme. people live giving and recieving like nature does, otherwise, we won't survive like nature wouldn't. what is sad about it is we do have feelings. it is more important for us how to deal with the real feelings along with any incidents happening in life.

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Wabi Sabi 27 March 2012

I scrach others even though I used to think I hadn't. In ways like nature does, we live recieving and giving. You write a right theme of life! I like it!

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Dave Walker 27 March 2012

A really great poem, really like it, a great write.

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