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hasmukh amathalal

(17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Privacy


I do lot of things but need privacy
Not to read too much in between for its legacy
Neither there is no hidden clause or diplomacy
Nor it is not to show any will or supremacy

It is human nature that compels us to hide
Something unusual to retain and not to confide
Wrong act but still in possession to remain
Not letting any one to venture in personal domain

Is it to satisfy personal ego or cheat conscience?
Why some of the acts should bother its presence?
Somewhere we feel it is hurting our prestige
Under the name of privacy we seek refuge

It is good to have something as private and confidential
Only self and no one else to know of its credentials
When time comes for its rightful address
You cry in isolation, curse self and confess

It is big thing to assess self and adopt in life
Certain things to self and not letting even to wife
This gives enough courage to handle the issue
Powerful shot’s in arm by remaining always true

It affords individual to enjoy or go for remorse
There is no tension or play of external force
It is seeking self inner voice and remedy
Life should not be allowed to result in comedy

Life needs full of interaction with zeal
Some of the things we may not perform real
Enter into provocation with shoddy deal
We try desperately to hide and conceal

Privacy is part of single or double individuals
To converse or exchange is merely a ritual
It is an act to find solace in each other
Nothing comes in between for anybody to bother

It has to be respected with complete sense
It is not execution of nefarious act or nonsense
It is precaution not to be invaded at a time
Life seems deserting and …………………..

Submitted: Thursday, January 07, 2010

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  • Darshna Chopra (8/6/2010 6:26:00 AM)

    I do lot of things but need privacy
    Not to read too much in between for its legacy
    Neither there is no hidden clause or diplomacy.... i need privacy for self....10 (Report) Reply

  • Maulin Shah (7/20/2010 6:40:00 AM)

    I do lot of things but need privacy
    Not to read too much in between for its legacy.... nice piece...10 (Report) Reply

  • Kamlesh Ambalal (7/5/2010 10:52:00 PM)

    I do lot of things but need privacy
    Not to read too much in between for its legacy
    Neither there is no hidden clause or diplomacy
    Nor it is not to show any will or supremacy..one may need it always...10 (Report) Reply

  • Kamlesh Ambalal (7/5/2010 10:51:00 PM)

    I do lot of things but need privacy
    Not to read too much in between for its legacy
    Neither there is no hidden clause or diplomacy
    Nor it is not to show any will or supremacy..one may need it always...10 (Report) Reply

  • Rinki Nandy (1/7/2010 7:59:00 PM)

    Nothing comes in between for anybody to bother (you said it....so true)

    It has to be respected with complete sense
    It is not execution of nefarious act or nonsense
    It is precaution not to be invaded at a time
    Life seems deserting and …………………...........and what? self obssessed and stupid, like all this while you were hididng coz you are insecure and unconfident. at the end you are nothing but a mere individual trying to feel happy by hiding and calling it privacy.


    gr8 write...sarcastic and ironic.10+++++ (Report) Reply

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