Problems Poem by David Darbyshire

Problems

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Everyone has a problem
some you can't, some you can see.
we all have to deal with them
I am sure you all agree

If you observe the people closely,
their problem you will see.
A limp, a scar, a burn
I am sure you all agree

It is the problems you cannot see,
this is what troubles me.
Hidden deep down inside, let it out
I am sure you all agree

Admitting you have a problem,
is the first step, to solving them.
This is the best way, you see
I really hope you all agree!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dee Daffodil 25 July 2006

Well written Dave...let's get those problems out in the open... hugs, Dee

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Patricia Gale 25 July 2006

Oh so true, the last line an exact fact.Getting wiser as years go bye Dave

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Francesca Johnson 25 July 2006

Seriously good advice, Dave, which, as a psychiatric nurse, I whole-heartedly agree with. Let it out. Talk to someone. A problem shared is a problem halved, they say. Love, Fran the Fan xx

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Nalini Hebbar 25 July 2006

wisdom...true and undiluted wisdom...lovely..nalini

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