Promising (100) Poem by VAIDYANATHAN.T. RAM

Promising (100)

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Promising,
Assurance offered towards something.
Promising,
Offering the word of trust.
Promising,
Maybe commitment offered in regard with time and date.
Promising,
Offering the perfection.
Promising,
Offered to make believe,
Promising,
Sometimes, It is offered as convincing.
Promising,
Keep your promise to one who believes you,
Can make the relationship more stronger.

Missing the promise,
Will lose the perfection.
Missing the promise,
Will lose the trust.
Missing the. Promise,
Sometimes, will lose the relationship.

Sometimes, somewhere, somehow,
May miss the promise due to unavoidable circumstances.
Sometimes, somewhere, somehow,
May miss the promise,
Due to your bad planning,
May miss your promise,
Due to the deppression.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjandev Roy 14 September 2019

An elegant piece. Thank u. anjandev roy.

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Promises must be kept, but sometimes, the circumstances do not allow the promises to be kept. Very often, promises are broken. The best would be not to make verbal promises. Instead just do in action the best you can do.without making tall promises. No point becoming depressed after that. Like Kumarmani ji has commented, i too agree that it is a beautiful poem with a nice theme.......10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 27 July 2019

Promising, Maybe commitment offered in regard with time and date.....yes, promise must be kept and it should be with time and date. Beautiful poem with lofty theme.

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