The Birds(1) Poem by VAIDYANATHAN.T. RAM

The Birds(1)

Rating: 4.7


How Cute, the birds fly,
Under the beautiful sky.
How cute, builds the nest,
Where it goes for the rest,
How cute, it makes noise,
Created with beautiful voice.
How cute, creation in nature,
But we need to protect its future.

Thursday, September 24, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fabrizio Frosini 24 September 2015

''we need to protect its future'' yeah, we should.. but every minute we destroy square kms of land on the planet and fill with poisonous substances air and water.. thousand and thousand of species are endangered.. Yet, too many human beings seem simply deaf and blind.. Thanks for sharing, Vaidyana

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 24 September 2015

How cute, creation in nature, But we need to protect its future. Verily, a lovely rhyming verse...........10

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Kelly Kurt 24 September 2015

I admire birds (and all of nature) and enjoy watching them. We must protect their habitat and our environment for both our futures. Nicely written, Vaidyana. Thanks. Peace

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Amitava Sur 24 September 2015

You said very rightly to protect bird. In fact every creature has the equal right to remain on this earth. And ultimately with a combination of all of them the harmony is maintained. We human should not think to live with our choice only. Thanks for sharing.

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Curtis Johnson 24 September 2015

It seems birds have never a care, and always feel confident that they will not only survive, but thrive for another day. Their creator cares for them well. I agree that the least that we can do is help God care for them.

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Chinedu Dike 22 March 2020

Beautiful poem nicely crafted in verse with rhythmic splendour. Thanks for sharing.

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Unnikrishnan E S 18 December 2019

Lovely poem. Like a beautiful painting..

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Dr Antony Theodore 12 December 2019

Birds, nests, singing, noise. you have powerful perception in you dear poet. thank u. tony

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Sankaran Ayya 06 November 2019

Beautiful lines on birds But we need to protect its future.- - yes it is true concern

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Akhtar Jawad 14 September 2019

Birds make our lives beautiful, a garden of flowers is incomplete without colorful birds. We should protect the birds.

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