Puzzled For Leslie Alexis Poem by ivor or ivor.e hogg

Puzzled For Leslie Alexis

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The peacock parades exquisitely.
Displays the glory of his tail,
the hens ignore him easily.
This bold display was bound to fail
The peacock has misjudged his time.
The hens aren’t ready to be wooed.
Although he thinks he is sublime
it’s not the time for hens to brood.
He’s young and inexperienced.
As yet he does not understand,
his tiny brain still hasn’t sensed.
The hens not he are in command.
The females don’t appreciate
his urgency he’ll have to wait.

20-Jan-09

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Toni Bellanger 13 July 2009

clever, i enjoyed it :)

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Dorothy Rowlinson 02 February 2009

I'm not into anything like this. It's mating and I 'd rather plain ordinary poetry about people one meets etc. But do not be disappoointed it is a good poem - there are others who probably will love this.

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C.R. Clark 20 January 2009

A captivating write, Ivor. Teenagers....what're ya gonna do with em? Best wishes Richard

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ivor or ivor.e hogg

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Hebburn.Co Durham U.K
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