Some take a pyramid
and turn it into
a scheme.
So they run away
to rule the world.
Others may take a pyramid
only to invert it.
They fast become obsolete
chasing a career into
oblivion.
Who wins?
THANKS LEMON FOR READING MY DIVALI POEM BUT YOU MUST ALSO GIVE UR INITIALS I HAD TO TRACE THRUPH
Thanks, Poet. Not sure...but doesn't the name pop out with the post? ?
The pyramid does win as another one will come and say a different thing if u study the PYRAMIDS as I do you will see the worlds dictionary in a pyramid it's concealed I have studied and so I know what makes the Pyramids of Giza the ZODIACS basic show not many know...Pyramid is the basics of ASTROLOGY
The power of the pyramid! Indeed, Poet, some are mesmerized by it. Thanks so much.
Neither of them wins, perhaps there aren't any winners in life anyway. Back to the poem, I love the way you used the idea of a pyramid here. Even if people waste their time running to the tip of the pyramid - it may be inverted. And they may become more obsolete instead of world rulers. Very interesting! Nicely written M.J.~
Thank you so very much, Nika. Yes, and I am amazed at how many people just don't realize the obvious, that a can run down.
The pyramid, because regardless how people using it pyramid is one that control their mind hahahahaha... This is interesting point. either pyramid or spherical structure, pyramid has edges that to win against each other, only the ones that can make it stable will be the base, the highest be the top. spherical however will roll equally! then forget about pyramid scheme, call spherical scheme! haha :)
Soul, thank you so much. You may have just, I believe, invented the inverted cone! !
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Pyramidal scheme motivates mind with interesting phase of life. Chasing a career into oblivion many others may take an oblivion. An excellent poem is very brilliantly and excellently penned.10
Thank you, Kumarmani. Indeed, so many meanings has the humble pyramid.