Quell Hour Poem by Moushumi moushumi

Quell Hour

Rating: 5.0


Every night left a day behind
Every day had a soul to hide
One is happy, perfect
One is void support
A seamless time chasing
A vehicle went past leaving all behind….

Who had etched this figure for me?
Who had seen this pallid by and by?
What a measured biography of time
An echoed chase ripping the air between….

11th Dec2008

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 13 December 2008

emotions cooling down...disgust hotting up...excellent word selection for etching out your imageries deep...the vehicle allegory is excellent...good work, Mousumi...10

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Shymal Chakraborty 13 December 2008

After reading your best creation I have landed into a city of emotion.....Asadharan...shyamal.

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