Quickie-Children Poem by Loke Kok yee

Quickie-Children

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Children love to be the center of attention
And will do anything for your admiration
But parents please exercise some caution
For they can end up in a dangerous situation

Quickie-Children
Saturday, October 17, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 22 October 2015

So very true! Children love to draw attention! So they will do anything to invite our attention...... without caring if it will land them in peril! They are incapable of understanding the consequences of their action! Until they are able to think for themselves, it is the duty of the parents to restrain them! Great advice!

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M Asim Nehal 18 October 2015

Wow, you write according to picture or your selection of picture is according to your write-up whatever they both go hand-in hand / hand in glove........Loved it.

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Sanjukta Nag 17 October 2015

A good advice. and the graphic you used for the example of the last line is very well chosen.

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Shakil Ahmed 17 October 2015

poem is beautiful and nicely penned. thanks for sharing if you find time please read some of my poems and leave your comments

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Kelly Kurt 17 October 2015

Good advice, as is evidenced by your picture.: -) Thanks

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