Quickie-Teeth Poem by Loke Kok yee

Quickie-Teeth

Rating: 4.8


I had my teeth scaled and polished today
The dentist said it’ll help to prevent decay
Now I flash it to anyone looking my way
Brightly shining and reflecting the suns ray

Quickie-Teeth
Saturday, October 17, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 17 October 2015

Superb.......Confidence and show-off together. Nicely written, I liked it.

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Melvina Germain 19 October 2015

lolol the imagery in this unique wee poem is fabulous, I can see clearly what is happening...Once again you delight me and I'm having so much fun reading your words today.....

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Douglas Scotney 12 July 2016

re that human mouth in that frog, have a look at my 'If They Could Do That' for an oleo leg made out of two pared humans.

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Simone Inez Harriman 16 November 2015

This one made me smile and laugh out loud when I saw the little picture. Hey this is what I needed. Came on to this site feeling blue and presto your poems have given me joy.....10

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Valsa George 20 October 2015

So small...... but too sweet! Great rhyme and wonderful presentation with an equally capturing image! A 10

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Akhtar Jawad 19 October 2015

Interesting poem, liked it..................................

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Melvina Germain 19 October 2015

Smiling large, by the way the photo of the missing teeth just did me in, I'm cracking up.....

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