Rain... Poem by Cherry Sha

Rain...

Rating: 5.0


From the middle of my porch,

I see this dusk……..

Enclosed with shadowy clouds,

I let my hand touch the drops…

Which when fall, on an old blue shed…

Make sounds.... as gloomy as..

a song which..

a century ago was sung……


Cold lane sleepy and silent..

Street light as dim as a kerosene lantern

I look at sky and then look down….

Looking for something…

which through eyes can't be found..

a plant of Rose..

longing for the flower

wet leaves and wet ground..

even moon has left for a region so far..


Twilight is passing…

What in night's arms lies….

D same old thoughts..

pleasurable memory…

Life has a beautiful...

N unforgettable history..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lily Law 27 March 2009

A vivid imagination of rain... sweet poem though... ^-^

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Fay Slimm 09 March 2009

Life certailny does have a 'beautiful and unforgettabe history ' Cherry and this is a lovely poem - - dreamy and atmospheric..... a 10 from Fay....

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Barbara Terry 09 March 2009

This is a wonderful poem basking in mother nature's elements. Life is definitely beautiful when we share it with our surroundings, and take in even the beauty of the rain. This is a vey picturesque poem with lots of vivid images, and reminds me of my poem, 'We Stood Outside In The Rain'. I rate this a 10+++++ and thank you for sharing. Love & hugs, Barbara

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anurag duggal 09 March 2009

this is a lovely poem...... :)) very well pictured :)) visually very strong

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Catrina Heart 09 March 2009

LIfe has a beautiful and unforgettable history lovely and unique ending......meanigful piece...Thanks 10+++

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