how lovely the rain,
pouring out love
in every field
how lovely the rain
if it pour just right
to each craving ground
quenching the terrain's thirst
supplying man's requirements
none flood to drain
none calamity to mule over
as rain sustains
just right, just right to our needs and gains......
Inspired by: samanyan lakshminarayanan's poem Rain
10th of November,2009
Catrina, I like your natural free flowing way of writing.....
wonderful flow of words..n u hav described the whole thing in short in such a complete way... always nice to go thru ur compositions....
Good to see a tribute to rain Catrina - - and well thought through it was a pleasure to read..... thak you Fay
rain we welcome and to run jump and laugh while pouring it was the joyous moods and moments.................
excellent, you made it just in time. As you said, just the right amount of rain, no more, . no less. We experienced a devastating flood lately because of torrential rain. But the kids would say, rain, rain, go away...come again another day...cause I want to play...All right! ! ! .
rain is greening to soils and even deserts it quenches the thirsty, THE RAIN OF LOVE IS VITAL to souls.............well done
how lovely the rain, pouring out love in every field...............................how much relief rain brings to our life...; it is beautifully crafted poem...love issimply pouring like poemandoneshouldbe proudof receiving such rain in life.......10 read mine..rain delay.. rain has come.. merci o, rain god... watched helplessly
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Another well written piece......