Rain Drops & Robins Poem by Patricia Gale

Rain Drops & Robins

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Watching rain drops on a cool spring day
Hearing the sound against the roof top
Seeing the crystal drops slide down the window
Simmering little diamonds

The stillness forms and heaven turns the faucet off
The robins wash their feathers
In the puddles in the drive
A single droplet hangs from the petals of a crimson red rose
Slowly sliding into the heart of its blossom

The earth has an air of clean wash
Peeks begin from the sun
As its rays absorb the lil’ diamonds
The clouds surrender
And the majestic ball of warmth makes her debut

Shedding the summer sandals
Barefoot as a child
I join the robins
Walking through the cool clear puddles
Feeling the tingle of childhood memories
Splashing and laughing
And once again I have found the inner child

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
... Sheila 18 May 2007

Tons of beautiful imagery here. It's been forever since I've gone outside and walked barefoot in the puddles after a rain!

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Radiant imagery pours from this cup of natures offering, compliments of your words. FjR

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Séamus Fox 17 May 2007

The Majestic ball of warmth what a beautiful description of an eternal thing. I am Impressed.

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Sophia White 17 May 2007

You paint an idyllic picture! Lovely diction and vibrant imagery!

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