Butterfly Dreams Poem by Patricia Gale

Butterfly Dreams

Rating: 4.5


Oh to be a butterfly and flutter my wings by your check
To have you admire me as I glide by your beautiful smile
To land upon your shoulder and watch you breathe
Oh to hear your voice sweetly recite
as you versed with magic tones
I would fly within your view

And from your sweet, sweet lips you would say,
Beautiful butterfly how I wish this night you were real
So I could hold you in my arms and love you always
Then the words would spin
My wings caught up in the twirl
And before your eyes…
I would be in human form
in your arms, forever more

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Duncan Wyllie 24 March 2007

Wonderful verse full of mystical feelings of love entwined, Love duncan X

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Robert Howard 24 March 2007

Romanticism breathes deeply in your romantic voice. What a dizzy and wonderful ride!

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Amanda Lukas 02 April 2007

Such a romantic wish. May you be the Monarch that perches in his rose garden and may he enjoy every sight of you there.

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Tabraze Rasul 24 April 2007

I see you are a fan of the butterfly? I too have used the butterfly in some of my poems....kudos to your work.

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Porter Daryl 27 April 2007

The shape of the stanzas reminds me of butterfly wings. Very stunning, and colorful.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 29 April 2021

...I glide by your beautiful smile.... exceedingly beautiful

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Dr Antony Theodore 15 February 2020

To land upon your shoulder and watch you breathe Oh to hear your voice sweetly recite as you versed with magic tones I would fly within your view great imagination and feelings. tony

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Dr Antony Theodore 26 December 2017

And from your sweet, sweet lips you would say, Beautiful butterfly how I wish this night you were real So I could hold you in my arms and love you always..........then i shall appear as a human being....... how lovely these thoughts are......... so imaginative... how we all wish that...... thank you dear poetess. tony

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Bill Cantrell 07 November 2016

What a absolutely wonderful poem, elegant and smooth with an innocent beauty.....this is poetry at its very best! !

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I just love the theme of a butterfly. Butterflies are just so spiritual. And your poem is enchanting and I can feel your spirit soar through the whole of this beautiful work.....Karin Anderson

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