Ovison Nita

Rain In The Deep - Poem by Ovison Nita

I feel a strange wind blowing with a sharp edge, calling and beckoning on thunder, i couldn't get a glimpse, until i was gripped, fire in my veins, higher than my rage, hot ice visits in an impromptu style, a harder tour embarks, falling waters envelope the depths, planely submits to deadlier storm i succumb, as flashes of cold fire and hot rain meet my face.

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when the rain falls down with all her strength.

Comments about Rain In The Deep by Ovison Nita

  • Rookie Ovison Enita (7/11/2013 7:45:00 AM)

    Yea indeed the sky falls! (Report) Reply

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  • Silver Star - 4,045 Points Dave Walker (7/10/2013 1:46:00 AM)

    A fine poem, the sky opens and the rain falls. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,738 Points Dinesh Nair (7/10/2013 12:41:00 AM)

    A good poem celebrating the festivity of rain written in precise format.. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, July 9, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, July 10, 2013

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