Rapidity Of Love! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Poem by SALINI NAIR

Rapidity Of Love! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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A dreamer alone in a corner
Dream of love with a haste
Love came with its crazy wings
Loop all dreams in its wings
Flew to the summit of a mirage

Its wings were solitude
Its eyes were pursuing
To sniff the love in its center
Love was sitting in a throng
Unaware of its gratitude

Crowded love bops in love
Rhythmic and clogged in love
Trapped in trenches so deep
Lazy love dream of love
Sink in love and perish in love


Love is lovely trap eternal
Dream won't protract as realistic
Though glimpse as a miracle worthless
Offer in a selfless tumbler
As love is mortal sometimes! !

©2014 SALINI.S.NAIR. All rights reserved.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ramesh Rai 27 October 2014

When love comes across selfishness it becomes rapid and thus perishable. A thoughtful write.

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Akhtar Jawad 29 October 2014

A dreamer alone in a corner that d flew to the summit of a mirage shows his strong desire of searching the truth of love.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 27 October 2014

Each line beautified the poem so lovely- dream love -Flew to the summit of a mirage nice

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Geetha Jayakumar 27 October 2014

Beautiful poem with fantastic lines.... Love is lovely trap eternal Dream won't protract as realistic Though glimpse as a miracle worthless Offer in a selfless tumbler As love is mortal sometimes! ! Very true said, Love is lovely trap eternal.. Loved reading it.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 27 October 2014

With a different view on love this piece is scripted....and it's a fact love faces mortality at the selfish hands......... very nicely presented

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Akhtar Jawad 27 October 2014

As love is mortal sometimes! ! A beautiful narration of true love an unending joy, an understanding a sacrifice.

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