I love and like
When they dislike
My presentation
And raise questions
I silently acknowledge
And feel as if in cage
New bird just starting to fly
I think of one more m try
They are my feelings
I feel proud in evening
When day passes of with joy
I take pen in hand and enjoy
I care for their comments
But remain absent
If pointer comes to my creation
I take not and try for more elevation
It is sort of inner excitement
That makes some movement
To write and explain
What is there in mind to maintain?
I shall flow with my thought
If ever it is caught
For controversy and praise
I shall make no chase
Readers are best judge
They will question and manage
It is our duty to convince
One they show interest or evince
Interesting... Collette Slater4 minutes ago It was a nice poem to read...
good flow Robyn2 minutes ago good writing but I didn't connect emotionally to this poem Comment +1 ..
very good perspective view point Susan WallLess than a minute ago I admire your way of seeing things.
Well said sir ;) 17 minutes ago by DARK ANGEL | Reply
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I love and like When they dislike