hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 65,162 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Ready For Relation - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

I preferred no day light
As it was dangerous to fight
In day night, I feared enemies of love
Who ignored carelessly with comments and finally drove

It was creating pain in heartland
So was disturbed my dreamland
It may ache at a time when some one was to visit
I had no time to look around and greet

He comes in night time to visit
I have enough of time for him to meet
Open windows and doors for him to enter
As he is the only one figure at the center

What he clearly sees in dark nights
Others fail to see in broad day light
He has fast breathing pulses
When all of sudden tries to rush

Such is my dreamland lover
A dedicated man and firm believer
To keep words and visit regularly
Feels completely and understands it fearlessly


Daily I decorate floor near the doors
Sometimes it might be noticed by the neighbors
All colorful designs are meant to attract his attention
With clear indication that I was the person ready for relation


Comments about Ready For Relation by hasmukh amathalal

  • Gold Star - 5,857 Points Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (5/16/2013 1:07:00 AM)

    a beautiful poem, Brother Hasmukh..I really enjoyed reading this poem and Dinesh Nair's poem to day... (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 65,162 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/15/2013 9:42:00 PM)

    I preferred no day light
    As it was dangerous to fight (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, May 15, 2013

Poem Edited: Thursday, May 16, 2013


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