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(17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

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Really bad start

It landed in break up
It was not easy cake
I was of demanding nature
That had made life unsecured

She was from poor back ground
But nice soul to be found
Anybody would have loved her
I added more worries to bother

She was not reluctant
For relation at present
But would not compromise
Even if she had open choice

She was conscious of her honor
I will go near her
Demand something unusual
She will resist and not take it as casual

Such was sweet tussle
But that let sometimes to scuffle
Often I will not budge
And sometimes she will grudge

This led to some kind of bitterness
It could be visibly seen on face
She tolerated enough but finally said no
I was shown the door to go

Thus ended our relation
There was no other question
Only adamancy on my part
In life it was really bad start

Submitted: Sunday, September 15, 2013
Edited: Monday, September 16, 2013


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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/16/2013 12:34:00 AM)

    Sam Bajwa likes this.

    Hasmukh Mehta welcome
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/15/2013 11:58:00 PM)

    Very well done


    Mohammd Rohani(najva Kashani) 8 minutes ago
    A beautiful poem with loving and passionate entrepreneurs

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/15/2013 11:33:00 PM)

    It landed in break up
    It was not easy cake

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