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Bethany Maxwell

(2/18/94 / some where in this universe muhahaha)

Redemption


I sit in a world that is my reality,
As I ponder the meaning of mortality.

It is my destiny it is my fate,
To leave behind this world of hate.

Today I wonder a world of perplexity,
Tomorrow I dance in a being of no complexity,

I will have no fear I will have no insecurity,
As I walk through the fields of purity.

I will leave all the hate and pains,
And I shall live in a world with no chains.

I will live in peace and I will live in serenity,
And I shall gain my full identity.

I shall not die I shall merely fade to a world of fantasy,
I will fumble with the perfect existence and living in a state of being like ecstasy.

I will dance with the stars and dance with eternity,
And leave behind all modernity.

I will be in peaceful being,
There will be no hiding and no more fleeing.

I will become what humanity has only dreamed,
From this world of sin and lies I shall be redeemed.

By: Bethany J. Maxwell

Submitted: Wednesday, August 05, 2009
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