Redemption Poem by Mark Shade

Redemption



The social expression of ones soul is not without the emotional downpour of ones mind
Tis but the way we define humanity, those intertwined such as thus.
The lack of connection is thusly just a deception concealed.
Alas the naive remain deceived
Just as their deceivers reveal their undoing as sanity breaks
And their hearts panic with the emotions unnatural and unintended
Ah, but the thoughts of the guilty devour the normalcy of the unbroken mind
Thus proven that not a person within existence can withstand 100% sin
Therefore any mean who seeketh, can find redemption

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eric Mwenda 09 February 2012

In Darkness - + - + - + - If mind and soul match in same pace then paths must be different, for soul sits pure but mind evaluates and counts and chooses a coat for the weather If mind and soul match in consistence, then body and its reality are but soldiers of opposition; stealing the mind for juicy treats There exists a centre about which all matter circles in perfect circle, so show me the centre of soulmind and bodyreality, who decides when it dawns? and why hold it back? Is there an accursed lot: doomed souls to thirst forever and minds to roam eternally

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