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Reflective Romance

Dear, you learn by mind
Memoirs of yesterdays
Dear, know me again
I’m still loving you

April 1, your birthday
I can’t surpass that day
Even after several years
Rewind recall your worth

Whenever enfold me
Solicited deep kiss
Obvious your sparkling eyes
Pleaded for the passion

You are my marvel
Reflective romance
I can’t flight any more
My first love, my sweet love

So zeal your smell
So nice your tone
So lovely your heart
So nurture your feel

Wherever you are
I’m sure you join me
I wish for call you to
Upcoming world of love

Dear, you learn by heart
Memoirs of yesterdays
Wait on reflective romance
I still be devoted to you

(Riyadh,20 June 2009)

Submitted: Saturday, June 20, 2009
Edited: Saturday, June 20, 2009


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  • Bindu Vidyadhar (7/23/2009 3:32:00 AM)

    Just make sure that your currant lady love does not see this poem. You could get yourself into trouble. Very nice poem.

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  • Zeinab Sherif (7/19/2009 11:56:00 AM)

    A perfect poem this one.it deserves10++++

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  • Seema Aarella (7/5/2009 9:04:00 AM)

    Passionate whispers in the loved ones ears, so dauntless and confident a lover feels when blessed with the girl of his love.......nice feelings, nice poem! ! ! !

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  • Sandhya S N (7/2/2009 6:18:00 AM)

    Dear,
    Lovely written
    words form your heart
    It is true that no one can ever forget one's first love
    sandhya

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  • Priyanka Bhowmick (7/1/2009 8:31:00 AM)

    a touching piece.. shades of true love.. lovely penned.

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  • Shilpa Luthra (7/1/2009 6:16:00 AM)

    I m speechless. i just almost cried.....so touching. so real.... m so glad to read ur poem. Good Job...

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  • Merna Ibrahim (6/30/2009 9:29:00 AM)

    what a romantic poem! ! ...........so emotional, , , , , keep it up...10/10.
    Merna

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  • Eyan Desir (6/29/2009 5:50:00 AM)

    Good write Jaleel
    10 points

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  • ata khan (6/29/2009 2:02:00 AM)

    nice and easy way to reflect romance
    i like your style
    thanks for sharing

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  • Obinna Eruchie (6/28/2009 8:06:00 AM)

    'Whenever enfold me, / Solicited deep kiss, / Obvious your sparkling eyes/ Pleaded for the passion', I love this ones most especially, they are remarkable.

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