Romantic Lie Poem by Jaleel Perinjanam

Romantic Lie

Rating: 5.0


You told me once
My care is amazing
You enlightened me
My eyes are passionate

I understood right away
Intention of your lie
Conceived you then
As a romantic liar

I am hypnotized
By stimulating splendour
Your adoring features
Touched innocent sense

Aggressive and obsessive
Kiss, knotted me to you
You were sensitive
Not to let me free

You became my dream
You became my psyche
You became my vision
You became my life

When I tie the knot
Masquerade taken out
Exemplified your
Inner parts of guts

I am aware now
You entrapped me
I want to find out
A romantic lie to escape

Flee from you at once
Glided on seven skies
Voyaged ocean limits
Probing for harmony

When I turned around
Find your burning tears
Dear, I’m back again
To be with you forever

How I save my face
Grab your lovely heart
I am searching for
Another romantic lie

(Riyadh 28 June 2009)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

a lovely poem, so beautifully written, romantic lie ends romantically...

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ata khan 29 June 2009

When I turned around Find your burning tears Dear, I’m back again To be with you forever I really can feel the emotion behind these lines, 10+++

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Bhaswat Chakraborty 29 June 2009

'I am aware now You entrapped me I want to find out A romantic lie to escape' This read so well...poetic. Your theme is very good and so is the write. Liked it very much.

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Eyan Desir 29 June 2009

Romantic flow Very sweety written

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When I turned around Find your burning tears Dear, I’m back again To be with you forever..... i loved the poem and ur opresentation too. u deserve 10 for ur poem read mine, Mom i miss you, inflamed mind and butterflies around.. comment

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Zeinab Sherif 11 July 2009

beautiful poem i love it.10+++

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Seema Aarella 05 July 2009

A romantic lie....a beautiful excuse, to love and hate.......very vivid expressions....all too well executed! ! ! ! !

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Indira Babbellapati 02 July 2009

everything is fair in war and love, so goes the saying...

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Sandhya S N 02 July 2009

When I turned around Find your burning tears Dear, I’m back again To be with you forever Very touching words congrats sandhya

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Shilpa Luthra 01 July 2009

wow its simply amazing. keep up the good work.

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