Rejected(Part One) Poem by Cynthia Cyanide

Rejected(Part One)

Rating: 4.3


She’s everything you’ve want
She’s your perfect little girl,
She’ll take everything you have
She’ll try to take the world,

I’m your little rebel
The one you don’t understand,
I’m the one who needs you
Would you please extend your hand,

She’s the one who’s perfect
But sneaks behind your back,
I guess she’s alittle too confident
Because she laughs at what I lack,

I’m the one who’s capable
Of anything, you know,
Yet I’m being held back
When I’m ready to run and go,

To be continued....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kyle Schaerffer 04 March 2008

Very good. i can't wait til part two

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Aurora Bell 17 December 2007

I really like this poem, the sytle of it and the way it flows, good job.

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Jona`e Levett 26 October 2007

i like this. yay.. its very beautiful.

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Gir Cupcake 25 February 2007

^^ its great! ! ! i can relate 2 it so much(u kno y) but hopefully it will turn out better 4 us 10/10^^ cant wait to read teh rest of it ur bestfriend, GiR

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