Release The Prisoner Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Release The Prisoner

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Release the prisoner living within you
Let him see the light,
let him enjoy the nature
Let him see some beautiful creations
The rising sun, the chirping birds
The roaring sea waves
The silent mountains
The astounding waterfall
The blooming flowers
The bees collecting nectar

Enough of you living in dark caves
Where the world is seen
By the series of reflections
Reality and truth is by far elusive
And change is seen as painful treatment
Where flowers are seen in colourful images
Mountains are drawn on walls
Nature is designed with thermocol
Rising sun is shown on canvas
The smell, the touch, the feel
When are in real then why imagine?
Live it, experience it and enjoy it
Let the wise argue about soul and body.

Saturday, June 18, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: inspirational,life,motivational,philosophical
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Indira Renganathan 18 June 2016

Thank you Asim...I feel both our poems are somewhat nearer to a same theme...You've crafted very well.. God bless you

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Anil Kumar Panda 18 June 2016

Beautifully written. Living in the lap of nature gives ultimate joy. Thanks for sharing.

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Kelly Kurt 18 June 2016

There is nothing that feels more free than releasing one's self to experience

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T Rajan Evol 23 July 2020

Enough of you living in dark caves Where the world is seen By the series of reflections Reality and truth is by far elusive

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T Rajan Evol 14 July 2020

Inspiring poem Asimji. you always write very interesting poems.

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T Rajan Evol 12 November 2016

Excellent poem so inspiring n motivating

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Edward Kofi Louis 19 June 2016

Enough of you living in dark caves! ! Nice piece of work.

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Aarzoo Mehek 18 June 2016

When are in real then why imagine? god helps those who help themselves. beautifully expressed thought. I believe in conquering.. a free spirited soul has the tendencies to spread joys more then an imprisoned soul. Liberate your thoughts and live in peace. one more marvel from your pen.10plussssssssss

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