Venus April


Remembered


I want to be remembered as…
The women that could brighten everybody's day
When she can't even brighten hers

I want to be remembered as the women
That makes you feel happy
When she can't even make herself happy

I want to be remembered
As the women that everybody is proud of
When she isn't proud of herself

I want to be remembered
As the women with a beautiful smile
But have hundreds of scars

I want to be remembered
As the women everybody, thought of as courageous
When she can't even say those three words

I want to be remembered as the women who is loved
And cherished…
But always chooses the loneliness

I want to be remembered
As the women who everybody thought, knew her life
When she doesn't even know the definition of life

I want to be remembered
As the women who never gave up
Even though she gave up on life and love

Submitted: Tuesday, July 31, 2012
Edited: Wednesday, August 01, 2012

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,229 Points Thomas A Robinson (9/11/2013 3:25:00 AM)

    Be you remembered for your poetry! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Venus April (8/3/2012 11:19:00 AM)

    Thank you very much. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 71 Points Vipins Puthooran (8/2/2012 10:34:00 PM)

    I want to be remembered
    As the women who never gave up
    Even though she gave up on life and love! !
    I like this line very much! ! !
    Excellent poem! ! ! ! top marksss (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 963 Points Saadat Tahir (8/2/2012 1:34:00 PM)

    I want to be remembered as…
    The women that could brighten everybody's day
    When she can't even brighten hers

    started off on deeply felt depressing lines.....and ended on a positive note..liked yer poem

    blessings (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 355 Points Sina Farajzadeh (8/1/2012 2:46:00 PM)

    Well, I would remember you as a woman who can effect others just by a pen. You would get them all for yourself, just want them, and you'll get them. (Report) Reply

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