wardha jawdat

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Repentence - Poem by wardha jawdat

Every man must bear his cross
And walk the road to perdition alone
Let us pray that the cross be wooden
And the road short,
For man is a vile creature
Who sins with fervor
And repents at leisure
And wishes that the crimes be punished
So that the guilt be assuaged,
But also that the punishment be mild
So that the lessons learnt be forgotten;
And the urge to err
Be forever young.


Comments about Repentence by wardha jawdat

  • Rookie - 359 Points Joe Breunig (4/3/2008 12:37:00 PM)

    A marveleous piece; Man is such a fickle creature, mostly blind to the Love and ways of God; you've captured the erroneous mindset wonderfully! (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 5 Points _____________________________________ - (4/2/2008 4:55:00 AM)

    Who sins with fervor
    And repents at leisure

    All mirrors reflect - some reflect a tad more profoundly

    very seasoned and settled work- keep it up girl

    rehan (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Wali Jamali (3/30/2008 2:56:00 PM)

    Hmmm, good approach to human psyche. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, March 30, 2008



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