Linda Ori

(08/13/1945 / UTAH)

' REVELATION


You alone reveal my soul,
The intimacy of my deepest thoughts
Wrapped around each emotion,
Each beat of my heart;

From infinite depths you see within,
Beneath the veil where truth lies,
This person that I am
Beneath your gaze - exposed;

No longer am I invisible -
The complexities of my inner mind
Unraveled, as the thread once coiled
Loosens beneath your touch;

A soul within a soul are we
Unfolding, as a blooming rose
That seeks the warmth of the sun............
Aroused from ancient slumber.


4/3/2009

Submitted: Friday, April 03, 2009
Edited: Friday, April 03, 2009

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  • Marieta Maglas (6/2/2009 12:39:00 PM)

    ''No longer am I invisible -
    The complexities of my inner mind
    Unraveled, as the thread once coiled
    Loosens beneath your touch; ''
    I didn't read before something like this. It is wonderful.10++ (Report) Reply

  • Shashendra Amalshan (6/1/2009 2:15:00 AM)

    I like these lines

    'A soul within a soul are we
    Unfolding, as a blooming rose
    That seeks the warmth of the sun............
    Aroused from ancient slumber.'

    nice one...very refreshing..helps to relax the sore mind

    with love shan (Report) Reply

  • Stephen Stirk (4/17/2009 11:16:00 AM)

    Hi Linda
    This one caught my eye. Another one that draws you in and keeps you there. Your words have such depth intimacy, and feeling that it cries out for a second read. Love is so often written about, so new poems need to be original. This has originality in abundance. I've written a song about it below:
    Tral la la.....Love it........Chorus.......refrain.
    Steve (Report) Reply

  • Vinod Kumar (4/15/2009 2:15:00 AM)

    Really dedicated to the depth of intimacy, love care and emotion all are there, nice piece,10+ (Report) Reply

  • Ramesh T A (4/5/2009 2:30:00 PM)

    Realisation of yours revealed through this poem will enlighten the readers as time passes on! Many roses will bloom under the Sun soon! (Report) Reply

  • James B. Earley (4/5/2009 11:12:00 AM)

    Uniquely spiritual...yet....at once...sensual! A real feel good effort. Excellent composition. (Report) Reply

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