Rhythm Of You Part One Poem by Garfield Grimmett
Rhythm Of You Part One
girl dont be shy
let me see the rhythm of your heart
just give me the beat and this
song is about to start
beauty is your melody
so lets move to this love
just me and you is what i was dreaming of
when im not around close your eyes
and think of me
your mind will be left with ecstacy
it will keep you up all night long
dont stop girl
lets continue this song
pretty as your smile
sexy as your walk
lets dance enough talk
our bodies touch and we feel the heat
we begin to make love to this beat
intense passion were both left with a crescendo of
satisfaction
the song doesnt stop playing
the love we feel is never fading
capitivated of what you say
the rhythm of your heart takes my breath away
copyright 2008 Garfield Grimmett
I like the rhythm of your poem. As you continue to write it will come together. Very good write and thanks for the invite. Your friend Lynn Take a look at my A Faded Rose.
a fine moving piece.........fine diction in a free verse form...10+++
had to give you a 10, just for the creative way you used your poem, as a rhythm, yet not make it out to a beat like for a song..i believe all poetry has its own ryhthm.also placed it on my fav list, my sister liked it alot, and so did i
The rhythm to this lyrical poem beat like the rhythm of the heart-it has a hip-hop beat. It's a beautiful poem/song. a 10 for sure.
It is nice poem that elucidated the love of a man to a woman. A lovely poem.10! Read mine 'Late Love' thanks
Well, this definatly has a rhythm to it! ! So much rhythm that i'm giving you a 10! ! ! ! ^^
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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What a poem full of passion and excitement! You're very goon in expression...keep writing :)