Rich Wind Poem by Konjit Berhane
Rich Wind
The rich wind with golden dust
Has been going wild and fast
As if it has a life that’ll forever last
The rich wind
With its sound so loud
To scare people or make them sad
But living is not so easy as I had
Never been scared by rich wild wind
Or by the redness of blood
Or would I ever have?
I can see nice wind of feelings from your poem.Very sweet and good flow. I liked it.I got nice imagery in it.
You know, I like the mood and the feel ofthis one...maybe not very poetically analytical words but that's just the way I read :) I think you could give it a little more impact though if you chose some stronger verbs to carry your imagery and the last line had me a bit confused. Did you mean..or would I ever be? ?
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/25/2024 9:36:26 PM # 1.0.0.1119
I wish steal few lines from this poem to keep in my loving memories