Kesav Venkat Easwaran

(June 5th / Palghat- Kerala- India)

Rickety Rackety…


Two young rookies in teens got married;
A beauty she softie, other one he smartie
A wee bit naughty;
On a night rosy,
Sweetie she softy feeling sleepy,
And naughty he, wanting to play
Rickety rackety,
There on they agree;
She to play sleepy and he to sleep
Rackety rickety…

01 09 08

Submitted: Monday, September 01, 2008
Edited: Sunday, December 20, 2009

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  • Saadat Tahir (6/4/2009 10:27:00 AM)

    very naughty..if caughty? ? ?

    written in a great mood and youthful exuberance...
    verty nice.....oh get a new car and dont forget the couch...; -)

    cheers an ten (Report) Reply

  • Palas Kumar Ray (9/12/2008 12:06:00 PM)

    Not unlikely that such was the experiance and agreement between our Grand Grand parents.Nice painting. (Report) Reply

  • Onelia Avelar (9/10/2008 8:49:00 AM)

    I am afraid I interpret it false :) and a bit naughty:
    She to play sleepy and he to play soften?
    Funny little piece, like a tongue-twister... for two :) (Report) Reply

  • Emancipation Planz (9/8/2008 4:24:00 AM)

    Now Kesav sir...
    why do I think I have to carry on with
    rookies at nookies
    smarty is hard, softie a tease..
    slippety slappety...
    both well greased...

    You wanted green...
    but didn't give me please? ? ? ? arohanui (Report) Reply

  • , aryaindia (9/7/2008 1:23:00 AM)

    This naughty poem reflects of moments when one is desirous and the other is not inclined but both make amends to please the other - the desirous one let's the mood pass and the one not inclined makes an effort to comply. Well expressed in short............arya (Report) Reply

  • Sadiqullah Khan (9/2/2008 2:21:00 AM)

    it appears to be like a puppet show, , , and in the end nothing happens, , , , still nice and funny, , from a good poet, , (Report) Reply

  • Viola Grey (9/1/2008 11:11:00 PM)

    so...who got the worst of that agreement....this is clever and very cute....nice work (Report) Reply

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