Two young rookies in teens got married;
A beauty she softie, other one he smartie
A wee bit naughty;
On a night rosy,
Sweetie she softy feeling sleepy,
And naughty he, wanting to play
Rickety rackety,
There on they agree;
She to play sleepy and he to sleep
Rackety rickety…
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so...who got the worst of that agreement....this is clever and very cute....nice work
it appears to be like a puppet show, , , and in the end nothing happens, , , , still nice and funny, , from a good poet, ,
This naughty poem reflects of moments when one is desirous and the other is not inclined but both make amends to please the other - the desirous one let's the mood pass and the one not inclined makes an effort to comply. Well expressed in short............arya
I have read many of yior old classics, but this is amazing playful. When reading, the sound is like a classic song withn a slower read, a very enjoyable poem A cute masterpiece Kesav Sir! Thank you for sharing this cute poem with a tinge of humor. I like it very much to read this Classic!
HaHa, was she pretending to sleep? And he pretending to awaken her? Rickety Rackety + Rack!
very naughty..if caughty? ? ? written in a great mood and youthful exuberance... verty nice.....oh get a new car and dont forget the couch...; -) cheers an ten
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I have no idea why I find this funnily rude. t x