Ring Poem by Sanjukta Nag

Ring

Rating: 5.0


Feed my earth with more forces of gravity
For absorbing the weight of your fondness.
Waves of senses opened the gate of ecstasy
Souls shatter into constant gleaming pieces.
I'd like to see you transfiguring into Saturn
Who possesses one thousand celestial rings,
Though one will be enough for us, my darling
To engage our love in an eternal bonding.

Friday, September 25, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 26 September 2015

I'd like to see you transfiguring into Saturn Who possesses one thousand celestial rings, Though one will be enough for us, my darling To engage our love in an eternal bonding. Love overflowing in rings and rings! ........ What intensity of feelings and what powerful way of presentation! A 10

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Liza Sudina 26 September 2015

want to sing a song for this text! here so soft the last line! ring! lovely!

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M Asim Nehal 25 September 2015

Wonderful poem with amazing ending: Left me in thoughts.... Though one will be enough for us, my darling To engage our love in an eternal bonding.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 25 September 2015

after reading this poem, many questions have burdened my state and let me have extra strength to neutralize the added gravity.. Thank you for sharing..

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