Ripple Of Love - By Nature Poem by M. Asim Nehal
Ripple Of Love - By Nature
The breeze gently touched her tender skin
Andkindled the ripple of love in the heart
The shell of desires opened slowly and softly
To sparkle the rainbow of light all around.
The murmur of her heartbeat could be heard
From miles away in silent valley of life
The sunflower opened its arms
Looking towards the sky of heaven.
Queen of the honeybee was bubbling with sweetness
Flowers offered their pure nectar
My heart started to pound out of my chest
And the nature in its peaceful silence
Started to pour the comfort around.
Tender breeze touches. Freshness murmur. Flowers offer pure nectar. You have rightly perceived the entire nature. This poem is very interestingly penned.
Rich in theme and in vocabulary. Nature is used to ignite love.10**
What are fantastic poem you have written I really enjoyed reading it and I got my favourite lines from your above poem The murmur of her heartbeat could be heard From miles away in silent valley of life The sunflower opened its arms Looking towards the sky of heaven.
A tender poem of love and the aesthetics of love written with beautiful metaphors. Fantastic Asim ji.........5 Stars
Love's interesting ripple we hear from your nice poem by revisiting this again. An amazing sharing is done.
Class poem Flowers offered their pure nectar My heart started to pound out of my chest And the nature in its peaceful silence Started to pour the comfort around....Wow 10/10
When love ripples It unrest water around Making life vulnerable With only single goal To live and die for.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Great metaphors. Basic instinct bringing forth fruit