Rise Again From The Debris Of Shattered Dreams Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Rise Again From The Debris Of Shattered Dreams

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It is not easy to rise after a great fall
It takes courage to stand and start all.

Fallen stars never return to the galaxy,
But we can with our determination and courage

Let remain some dreams as the dreams to sail on
Not all dreams are realistic and worth trying on.

No matter how many attempts we make
Each time we will learn some new passage.

Like a phoenix we rise from the dust of the past
Like the fallen seeds germinate and restart.

Like the sun which goes down in the dusk
Rises again with a new light at the dawn.

Remember the vibes of the mount valleys
It preserves the echoes of the past until eternity.

The roaring waterfall and gushing rivers
When they meet the sea, it gains the calmness forever.

Our trapped soul in the body is making us restless
Calm it down with meditation, patience and perseverance

Every day our body will sleep and take some rest
The mind will keep dreaming and make bodily unrest

Before the dreams become elusive and mysterious
O My Master make them the air we breathe and persist.

Sunday, September 13, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: inspiration,inspirational,motivation,motivational
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Zehra Bukhari 13 September 2020

Inspiring Poem! The world is beautiful and we should learn to never give up ~Zehra~ Young Poet

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Varsha M 13 September 2020

Really very inspiring and encouraging. It is not easy to rise after a great fall It takes courage to stand and start all...very true. Every word is meaningful. Thank-you.

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Edward Kofi Louis 13 September 2020

Age! ! ! ! Courage! Trying to rise up once again! ! ! After the fall; Never giving up. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 13 September 2020

The roaring waterfall and gushing rivers When they meet the sea, it gains the calmness forever....... outstanding conceptualization. In Hindi there is a saying - " Jeisa sang eisa rang." The influence of companions is difficult to avoid. So one must not be motivated by wrong person. Meditation, patience and perseverance can make one's mind calm and quiet. You have aptly delineated this poem with great theme. Marvelous. Full vote.

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Poetic Sky 15 September 2020

Inspiring poem. Nicely written.

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Zoyza Da Vinka 15 September 2020

Motivational and inspirational poem.

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Darren Jkoeryo 15 September 2020

DJ liked it. Your poem is really inspiring.

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Kostas Lagos 13 September 2020

Written in an excellent way! Thanks!

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Michael Jack 13 September 2020

Inspiring and motivating poem. Thanks Before the dreams become elusive and mysterious O My Master make them the air we breathe and persist.

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