River Of Love Poem by Freni Karaluthara

River Of Love

Rating: 5.0


From mountain of Love the river rises,
It flows gently and calmly, kissing and embracing,
both banks on its way to the ocean of love,
watering every vine and bramble, fig and thorn

I felt, I was entering into this river of love,
and flowing smoothly alone with it on its way.
It was a river sheer unfamiliar to me,
I admired its calmness, beauty and depth.

I knew not what its thoughts were, but
it solicited me to flow along with it, I thought.
Like a prankful child I played on its banks.
It furthered and cared for my every desire to swim.

I paced a few steps with wavering heart,
love pressed me from every side,
that persuaded me to go to the deep end,
and never before did I enjoy such a delight.

My steps were sure and firm and
I wish to flow with her to ocean of love.

River Of Love
Thursday, May 28, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: spiritual
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gordon Walter 25 August 2020

This is a wonderful poem ended in a spiritual ocean. Very well written.10++++++

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Dr Antony Theodore 12 June 2020

I paced a few steps with wavering heart, love pressed me from every side, that persuaded me to go to the deep end, and never before did I enjoy such a delight. my steps are firm. i love to go into the ocean of love to the deep end. this is my call.....thank you dear Frenny for such a wonderful mystical poem. tony

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Freni Karaluthara 12 June 2020

Dear Tony thank you for your wonderful and inspiring comment.

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Jazib Kamalvi 01 June 2020

Such a nice poem, Freni. Read my poem, Love and L u s t. Thanks.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 28 May 2020

My steps were sure and firm and I wish to flow with her to the ocean of love. Who wouldn't want to flow into the ocean of love? All of us, of course! An endearing poem about love, I really enjoyed this fascinating verse. Thank you so much for sharing.

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Thank you so much for your friendly invitation, dear Freni. God's Blessings in Abundance for you. I absolutely enjoyed very much.

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Freni Karaluthara 01 June 2020

Dear Sylvia, thanks a lot for your comment, the words of apprciation. I am so happy to have it. God bless

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Dear sylvia, thank you very much for your valuable comment on my poem.

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